Saturday, July 31, 2010

Soul


We are indebted,
To our creator,
He is the one who decides,
About life and death.

When our life is through,
Our souls become free,
But only the trace of our tragic end remains,
Hurting the many others who see it.

Free spirited that we are,
Mortality is only till our body is,
Transcend the idea of body,
And we become immortal.

Our creator gives us life,
To live to die,
To love and to part,
No matter how the end is.

I feel touched by the love,
And Warmth I feel,
Towards my folks,
That includes my creator and other  travellers like me,
One day my end will come,
And I’ll die,
But my love remains.
My love is towards everything that concerns,
And  overwhelm me,
I am immortal for my love is pure,
And this soul is my first love.

“FOREVER I SEE,
FOREVER I LOVE
AND FOREVER I REMAIN,
IN THE HEART OF ME!”


6 comments:

surabhi said...

hey it is nice.....

UjSen said...

epic! :D


Mind me adding you on facebook?

Tanvi Nimkar said...

@Ujsen: Oh thats a great compliment :) Thanks!
And i don't mind, add me :) Take care of your health :D

@Ss: Thanks dear!

Anonymous Someone said...

you know, there is a quote on immotality.

I dont want the immortality where my name is remembered,
I want the immortality where I dont get to die.

Life is short, live it.

Interesting poem.

Cheers Blasphemous Aesthete

dhawal said...

mortality and immortality are too high a concepts for us humans... Life's much better off thinking abt the small happy moments. a happy present is better than any kind of past or future..!

Tanvi Nimkar said...

@Anshul: The quote is indeed lovely!

@Dhawal: Yes i agree. We should live every moment without worrying about the past or future. But sometimes this too much thinking results in these poetic stuff :P