Tuesday, February 15, 2011

The footprints in mind






‎Sometimes your lonely presence,
The lonely shadow,
haunts me here,
I want you to leave me alone,
I want the memories to get far off,
I just want to feel it all,
how its to be far.



The times we were together you fought,
you never cared for the love i showered,
I waited all these years for your hi,
I waited to see your name flash on my cell,
 waited to see you smile,
Now its all burdening me,
I have gone deeper than it seems,
In my love I have given you all.


I am empty now,
The shallowness of mind gone,
The innocence all lost,
Its you who did to me,
And it was I who got lost on the way.


You never turned back,
Tears come down this time,
With the verve to get some relief,
From your haunting shadow,
From the traces you left behind,
I am trying to wipe away them somehow.

17 comments:

Rachit said...

Speechless... alluring... lonely...

Tanvi said...

Did i leave you speechless? Alluring to the self it is, and lonely tonight is... :P Feeling cold and stressed up!

Rachit said...

Speechless... quite off, Alluring, the lyrics, lonely... someone for whom it was written...!!

Doctor catching cold...hehehe..:P

Tanvi said...

Even i wish it was written for someone real.. :P heehee :D I am in firt year only yet.. :P Long long way to become one..

Rachit said...

:):):)
Stressed up.. even my internals are getting me into it...

Tanvi said...

Expected, thats the reason why you are up so late! :P

Rachit said...

listening punjabi beats... :P nnn thinking whether I should wake up for next day internal..:O

Tanvi said...

Why are you thinking?! Stupid, just dance the night away and wake up on time for the classes but go wild, bunk and go to someplace alone!!! :D

Rachit said...

I will surely wake up... can't miss the morning breakfast full of butter n paratha.. n my fav. tea...:P

n alone... it's has became my testimony...:O

Tanvi said...

heeehhee poor you! chuuu chuuuu :P :P Tea? Oh great... miss it though..

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi
"the beats of the heart, alone in the dark..."
this is what came to my mnd wen i read the post...
nice, a bit too dark though...
:)

Regards,
The Silhouette...

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Everything fades, just don't push yourself too hard.
The ocean, it takes away every trace of who walked on the shores, no matter how deep the impressions they manage to leave.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Tanvi said...

@Harsh: The lines are good.. :) sound like those of a song.. :) Dark yes, special effects :P

Tanvi said...

@Anshul: True..very true.. :) Thanks :)

dhawal said...

criusly speechless...!!! just leaves you with a feeling to keep on thinking what you have just read..!!! brilliant...!!!

Shail said...

Beautiful poetry. Take Care.

taio said...

excelent