Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Darkness falls


Sometimes I feel  so lonely,
The darkness that falls creates a void.

I cry and I cry,
I regret for ever having you in my life,
I got nothing but sorrow,
You took away whatever was mine.

I feel so lonely,
The darkness that falls creates a void.


When the twilight falls, and the city sleeps
comes home my sorrow when I should sleep.
I wrote this at 1-30am, when i was trying to sleep..

8 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Though its supposedly a sad and dark post,
but I was musing after this song...

Far far away, no voices sounding, no one around me, and you're still there.

Far far away,no choices passing, no time confounds me, and you're still there.

When the thorn bush turns white thats when I'll come home,
I am going out to see what i can sow

Chandrika Shubham said...

Beautiful pic.
Well written poem. :)

Tanvi said...

@Anshul: Nice lines... Thats very inspiring :)

Tanvi said...

@Chandrika: Welcome to my blog.. Thanks for appreciating :)
Keep coming :)

sm said...

beautiful poem

Tanvi said...

@Sm: Thank you :)

The Silhouette said...

hey Tanvi,
i apologize for not being arnd for quite some time....

well, its only when we are with ourselves that we know ourselves better...the lonliness of the dark night sure brings back memories...good, sometimes bad...but the best part of it is...its only yors...no one can take them from you...not even the one who created them...

beautiful...

Regards,
The Silhouette...

Shail said...

Nice lines. So full of emotions....I feel like crying.